Post by Vegeta on Oct 7, 2010 14:28:14 GMT -5
"GOOD MORNING SIRE," said the two henchman in fear while passing by King Vegeta in the halls of his palace. The King gave a little grunt in acknowlegment. The lord of all saiyans was on his way to the royal gym, to do his morning routeen. As he walked twords the door, he saw General Zorn standing by the window looking into the gym. The General didn't notice The King, he seemed focused on whatever he was looking at. King Vegeta then placed his hand on Zorn's shoulder. General Zorn quickly turn too, he smiled as he popped to attention and started to bow. "Good morning My King." The King smiled back, "Good morning old friend." The words came out calm, putting the General at ease. The two saiyans then looked threw the window into the gym. "How longs he been in there?" Asked The King. "Hours Sire." Replied the General, "He's defentily your son." King Vegeta smiled with pride.
Inside the gym Prince Vegeta was surrounded by 5 henchman. The henchman were shaking with fear. Vegeta had his eyes closed smiling with confidence. He knew they were scared. He was on roll today. Vegeta being on a roll meant people died, and the henchman knew that very well. "Well lets go you weaklings, I'm starting to get bored." Said the Saiyan Prince. The first henchman ran in with blurry vision driven by fear. Vegeta's grin widend. The henchman swong for the Princes face. Vegeta dropped to one knee ducking the punch. He came right back up driving his forehead into the henchmans chin. The henchman fell like a ragdoll to the floor fast. The victims eyes went solid white. The other henchman gasped at the horror. Vegeta then lept tword the nearest henchman and threw another headbutt into this ones nose, dropping him just the same. Vegeta then stopped for a second, looked at the other three in the room. Vegeta burst into an evil laughter. He then put his hands behind his back. "LOOK NO HANDS." The three remaining hinchmen froze with fear as Vegeta rushed at them with lightining speed. Vegeta lep right as he got to two of them and put both his knees into both their chins. The two henchman folded over ackwardly, and layed still. Vegeta then looked to the last victim. The henchman stood shaking, groaning, and pissing his pants. "Discusting." Vegeta said, as his smile turn straight. Vegeta spoke very cold, "Get out of my sight." The henchman still trimbling nodded, bowed, and quickly turned and went for the door. As the henchman turned to run for it, Vegeta knoticed a brown stain on the back of the henchmans pants. Vegeta face exploded with rage. The Prince dove twords the Henchman focusing all his power into his fist. Vegeta punched the Henchman, with incredible strength, in the back of his helmet. Sending the henchman exploiding threw the door. Vegeta walked slowly tword the now mangled victim. He lifted his foot about to crush the henchmans head.
"Enough Vegeta." The Prince smiled recognizing the voice. "Good morning father," said the young saiyan. All three now stared at the mess Vegeta made. General Zorn looked at the henchman lying brutaly on the ground. " The General laughed and said, "Look Sire, your son made this one shit himself."
"I see." Said the King. He then stared at his son, who was already staring at him. They stood staring at eachother with emotionless. The King knew he son was getting stronger... alot stronger. King Vegeta then turned around and said, "General thats enough training for today. Get someone to clean this up."
"Yes Sire," replied General Zorn, and gave a bow. King Vegeta started walking away, as he got far away enough from the from his son, He mouth turned into a small smile. He then fealt a wave of pride and burst into a awesome laughter that the whole palace could easily here. Including his son.
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Inside the gym Prince Vegeta was surrounded by 5 henchman. The henchman were shaking with fear. Vegeta had his eyes closed smiling with confidence. He knew they were scared. He was on roll today. Vegeta being on a roll meant people died, and the henchman knew that very well. "Well lets go you weaklings, I'm starting to get bored." Said the Saiyan Prince. The first henchman ran in with blurry vision driven by fear. Vegeta's grin widend. The henchman swong for the Princes face. Vegeta dropped to one knee ducking the punch. He came right back up driving his forehead into the henchmans chin. The henchman fell like a ragdoll to the floor fast. The victims eyes went solid white. The other henchman gasped at the horror. Vegeta then lept tword the nearest henchman and threw another headbutt into this ones nose, dropping him just the same. Vegeta then stopped for a second, looked at the other three in the room. Vegeta burst into an evil laughter. He then put his hands behind his back. "LOOK NO HANDS." The three remaining hinchmen froze with fear as Vegeta rushed at them with lightining speed. Vegeta lep right as he got to two of them and put both his knees into both their chins. The two henchman folded over ackwardly, and layed still. Vegeta then looked to the last victim. The henchman stood shaking, groaning, and pissing his pants. "Discusting." Vegeta said, as his smile turn straight. Vegeta spoke very cold, "Get out of my sight." The henchman still trimbling nodded, bowed, and quickly turned and went for the door. As the henchman turned to run for it, Vegeta knoticed a brown stain on the back of the henchmans pants. Vegeta face exploded with rage. The Prince dove twords the Henchman focusing all his power into his fist. Vegeta punched the Henchman, with incredible strength, in the back of his helmet. Sending the henchman exploiding threw the door. Vegeta walked slowly tword the now mangled victim. He lifted his foot about to crush the henchmans head.
"Enough Vegeta." The Prince smiled recognizing the voice. "Good morning father," said the young saiyan. All three now stared at the mess Vegeta made. General Zorn looked at the henchman lying brutaly on the ground. " The General laughed and said, "Look Sire, your son made this one shit himself."
"I see." Said the King. He then stared at his son, who was already staring at him. They stood staring at eachother with emotionless. The King knew he son was getting stronger... alot stronger. King Vegeta then turned around and said, "General thats enough training for today. Get someone to clean this up."
"Yes Sire," replied General Zorn, and gave a bow. King Vegeta started walking away, as he got far away enough from the from his son, He mouth turned into a small smile. He then fealt a wave of pride and burst into a awesome laughter that the whole palace could easily here. Including his son.
Word count 3,774
Lemme know whatchu think